My Idea for a Ghostbusters movie that wouldwork better than the current dumpster fire of a film

Ghostbusters 3

     A woman standing by a news stand looking through magazines sees a newspaper with 4 men on the front page. They're holding proton packs and she picks it up, "Margie. Hey, Margie, ar ethese the guys you were talking about?" Her friend grabs it and responds, ""Yeah, those guys were ca-raazy! They took these...proto bags and like, trapped ghosts.
" Ghosts aren't real, these guys must have made it all up or something."
They continue talking and a man walks by, smirking. He walks a block away, surveying the street and comes to a building. He casually puts his hand on what looks like a brick wall but a thin slit opens up just enough for him to calmly walk through and it closes just as quick as it opened.
"PJ, where'd you go?" said a woman in the secret looking room. He smiles and holds up that same newspaper. The woman gives him an annoyed look and spins back around in her swivel chair, "Ya know you can't be that cool for too long. It's not good for your health." PJ then reveals  a container from his back pack. It's smoking and square, he drops it in front of the woman, "Casey, me? Healthy? I'm fit as..."
she cuts him off, "If you say a fiddle, you're not gonna be healthy for much longer." He smiles at her and she starts hitting keys on the computer in front of her.
The smoking box was slowly pulled toward a containment unit in the wall, magnetically aligned and guided into a drawer. Another man walks in and sits next to Casey and asks PJ, "Did you get the specimen? What happened?" PJ was about to answer but before he could get one word out the man cut him off, "And I don't want to hear 'It was me vs a thousand strong monsters and I took them all out in a one-on-one battle...blah blah blah' I want exactly what happened.
PJ told him happened at the donut shop:
     "I walked in and saw three people, one cashier and two customers. They were terrified, I looked behind them and saw what looked like a sorta man-ish thing on a horse. It was above the exit doorway and was guarding them. I first tried to talk to it and...well, that didn't go the way I was hoping. I think he had a grudge against white..." The man interrupted, "Save the jokes please. Just stick to what happened."
"Ok ok. So then he kinda...well, he tossed me across the room. Luckily I was holding that and was able to get it close enough to grab him." He pointed to the ghost trap.
The man responds, "Was everyone alright?" he asked, putting his hand on PJ's shoulder. He nodded and the man said, "Your dad would be proud, you're doing a good job." PJ stopped him and got serious, "My dad...he may have been one of 'the first Ghostbusters' but he was not NEARLY as good as I am." He then took a breath and smirked, "Besides, I do this to keep fit...right, Casey?" she responded as she walked out of the room, "Way to be humble."
The man picked up a phone and dialed, "Hello? This is district 4125. Yeah, Peter Jr just caught a specimen. Yes, we have it in our containment unit. He described it as a Midwestern apparition. Thank you. Yes, I'll be writing the report momentarily. Thank you, good bye." He then walked to his office and as he shut the double doors, the Ghostbusters emblem came together and the ghost changes it to put up three fingers.

     Ok, that's my current idea for the intro to a Ghostbusters movie I think we can all get behind...at least a lot better than the 2016 self righteous masterpiece of...well, you know.

     Let me know what you think, imagine seeing exactly this as a commercial. What would you think? Leave a comment and share this. Thank you very much.